{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"41662505","dateCreated":"1314283984","smartDate":"Aug 25, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cristinamichels","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cristinamichels","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/ohchrglossary.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/41662505"},"dateDigested":1532174785,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"comments on condensed entry","description":"the condensed entry does not sufficiently spell out the elements constituting a violation of freedom of movement - the last para should be expanded. A few examples could be added of typical situations illustrating the violation e.g. illegal checkpoint by soldiers on roads. There are some examples mentioned in the comprehensive entry that could be added too. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nThe last para in the comprehensive entry is important and should be mentioned in the short one as well:<br \/>\n&quot;Article 12(1) of the ICCPR prohibits interference with the right to movement whether or not the interference emanated from a public or private individual or entity.  Thus the right of a woman to move freely may not be made subject, by law or practice, to the decision of another person, including a relative.  The HRC has expressed concern at a Yemeni law requiring a married woman to secure her husband's permission to leave the home. &quot;","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"41687475","body":"There is also a need to clarify what is meant by the examples of restrictions in parenthesis: (such as dependency or reason requirements) - not clear.","dateCreated":"1314341161","smartDate":"Aug 25, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cristinamichels","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cristinamichels","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"41687739","body":"the principle of proportionality should be mentioned also in the condensed definition, as it constitutes one of the key elements to determine whether a violation of freedom of movement has occurred. As for other entries, it would be better to display with bullet points or (a), (b), (c) the key elements constituting the violation","dateCreated":"1314342926","smartDate":"Aug 26, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"cristinamichels","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cristinamichels","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}